Saturday, 5 November 2011

My Haunted School ( Chapter 1 ) The Mystery Clue

Chapter 1

Hi, my name is Zana Atrina and I'm 11 years old. Can I ask you a question? What monster lurks under your school? That haunts you everywhere you go? That changes your life forever?
I'm just like you. I, too, am an original girl like any other and I would like to tell you a story of what happened to me last week...

My best friend is Katherine Lee and Samantha Chua. Their both 11, just like me. We were having free fun until then, when that night changed my life forever...
It was a lovely morning and I was going to school as usual for my volleyball training at the court. I stepped down from the bus and met my friends in class.

''Hi,girls.'' I said as I set down my bag.'' Hi,'' they replied.''What about our usual warm coffee at the cafe?'' asked Katherine.'' Sounds good to me.'' I agreed. It was very funny why a simple trip to the cafe could change our life forever...

We sat at our usual table in the corner.'' Three warm coffee and some ginger buns please.'' said Samantha to the waitress. In a few minutes, she came back with our orders. Then, I realized she wasn't the old waitress I'd known before. Somehow, she had changed. Her hair was dyed purple, her body looked very thin, she put on a thick layer of makeup and looked pretty weird.

The young woman scurried on and dropped a piece of folded paper from her pocket. I picked it up.                
'' Waitress...'' I called. '' You dropped something!''

But she was already out of sight. I put it on the table and showed it to my friends. '' Interesting,'' agreed Samantha, sipping her coffee.'' Open it!'' cried Katherine, munching on a a ginger bun. I took a deep breath and unfolded it.

It was a picture of our school. and a few words written below it: '' The Haunted School, PS: the library'' I gasped. I passed it to my friends. When they read it, their faces paled. I looked breathless...



( TO BE CONTINUED...)

2 comments:

Syauqah Mujahidah said...

Kak Long...
Nice..
Keep up the good work ok..

Acu`

Alyssa Zahirah said...

Thanks
I'm looking forward for a new chapter
Bye acu

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Saturday, 5 November 2011

My Haunted School ( Chapter 1 ) The Mystery Clue

Chapter 1

Hi, my name is Zana Atrina and I'm 11 years old. Can I ask you a question? What monster lurks under your school? That haunts you everywhere you go? That changes your life forever?
I'm just like you. I, too, am an original girl like any other and I would like to tell you a story of what happened to me last week...

My best friend is Katherine Lee and Samantha Chua. Their both 11, just like me. We were having free fun until then, when that night changed my life forever...
It was a lovely morning and I was going to school as usual for my volleyball training at the court. I stepped down from the bus and met my friends in class.

''Hi,girls.'' I said as I set down my bag.'' Hi,'' they replied.''What about our usual warm coffee at the cafe?'' asked Katherine.'' Sounds good to me.'' I agreed. It was very funny why a simple trip to the cafe could change our life forever...

We sat at our usual table in the corner.'' Three warm coffee and some ginger buns please.'' said Samantha to the waitress. In a few minutes, she came back with our orders. Then, I realized she wasn't the old waitress I'd known before. Somehow, she had changed. Her hair was dyed purple, her body looked very thin, she put on a thick layer of makeup and looked pretty weird.

The young woman scurried on and dropped a piece of folded paper from her pocket. I picked it up.                
'' Waitress...'' I called. '' You dropped something!''

But she was already out of sight. I put it on the table and showed it to my friends. '' Interesting,'' agreed Samantha, sipping her coffee.'' Open it!'' cried Katherine, munching on a a ginger bun. I took a deep breath and unfolded it.

It was a picture of our school. and a few words written below it: '' The Haunted School, PS: the library'' I gasped. I passed it to my friends. When they read it, their faces paled. I looked breathless...



( TO BE CONTINUED...)

2 comments:

  1. Kak Long...
    Nice..
    Keep up the good work ok..

    Acu`

    ReplyDelete
  2. Thanks
    I'm looking forward for a new chapter
    Bye acu

    ReplyDelete

 

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